Thursday, April 27, 2017

AP Review


Here is a list of the top 10 rhetorical devices you can refer to on your Rhetorical Analysis essay:

1. Tone -- The general attitude a writer is using to get their message across.  Associated with the emotion the writer or speaker is using.  If you use tone in your essay, make sure to explain with your commentary why you think they were using this tone.
Example:  When Abigail Adams is using a concerned tone in her letter to her son it is because she wants him to realize that this moment is a turning point in his life.

2. Diction -- The choice of words (or phrases) used by a speaker or writer.  If you focus on the diction being used, try to select words that emphasize a certain idea.
Example:  JFK's use of the words "unjustifiable" and "irresponsible" to demonstrate that he is disgusted with the steel industry taking advantage of the American people.

3. Repetition -- Used to emphasize a point or idea by a writer or speaker.  If you decide to use this in your essay make sure it is a word that is used throughout the piece.
Example:  Benjamin Banneker referred to Thomas Jefferson throughout his letter as "Sir" to create a sense of respect, even though he was pointing out that Jefferson was being a hypocrite.

4. Theme -- The overall topic or lesson that a speaker or writer is trying to get across.  If you focus on theme you can emphasize the bigger message the writer is making.
Example:  When discussing the trend with plastic pink flamingos, Jennifer Price is uncovering how nature is cheapened by consumerism.

5. Sarcasm (or satire) -- To mock with often satirical or ironic comments with the purpose to amuse or hurt someone or something in society.  Remember if you want to state that something is satirical it should be critical of society or an idea.
Example:  In the piece about MagnaSoles the writer is using satire to demonstrate how advertisers take advantage of consumer’s ignorance.

6. Allusion -- A reference to a historical event, a literary piece, religious connection, etc.  If you decide to use allusion in your essay make sure you make a clear connection in your commentary as to why the writer was making this reference.
Example:  Abigail Adams alluded to Cicero and Mark Anthony to support her argument that her son is following in the footsteps of great men.

7. Analogy -- A similarity or comparison between two different things or the relationship between them.  If you refer to this in your essay make sure you are clear with your commentary as to why the author is making the comparison.

8. Style -- The overall way a writer writes.  This is a rhetorical device that encompasses many things such as diction, syntax, tone, etc.  You can use this as a main idea and then within the body paragraph break down the writer's use of tone, diction, etc. that demonstrates their specific style.
Example:  Hawthorne's style is very indicative of the Puritan period in which people were very religious and followed the Bible very strictly.

9. Syntax -- The sentence structure a writer uses.  If you decide to use this in your essay try to point out differences such as longer versus shorter sentences and why they are doing that.

10. Appeals (Ethos, Logos, Pathos)  Remember you do not have to refer to the appeals by name, but you can explain them such as the author is appealing to the audience's emotions, using logic or asserting their credibility.

Monday, April 24, 2017

English II upcoming grades

Here is my tentative plan for the next few weeks:

Week of April 24th:
*Continue with novel
*Vocab.com for the week
*Daily journals

Week of May 1st:
*Presentations begin
*Teacher Appreciation assignment
*Commonlit
*Vocab.com

Week of May 8th:
*Presentations continue
*Mother's Day assignment
*Commonlit
*Vocab.com

Week of May 15th:
*Tshirt decorating
*Fieldtrip

Week of May 22nd:
*Selecting pieces for end of the year book
*Community service proof due
Here is the link for the Community Service Form

I will be giving a grade for showing me proof that you have started completing community service hours.  You will need to show me by May 26th that you have completed at least one hour of service.
One of the easy ways to earn this grade is to bring in items for the Peru Flood drive that is going on until April 27th.
You can bring in the following items:
*Canned food
*Rice
*Beans
*Spaghetti
*Water

You can also bring in 50 soda can tabs for the Ronald McDonald House for an hour of community service, which would count for your grade.

If you already have existing hours of community service you can bring that to show me as well.

Everything Everything Project

We are almost done with the book and as I mentioned earlier this nine weeks, you will be planning your own trip.

Here is what you need to include for your project:

1. Using the program Sway on your student portal, you will create a presentation about your trip.
2. Your presentation must include:
     A. Name of place you want to visit
     B. Picture or pictures of place
     C. Why do you want to visit that place?  Explain.
     D. Things you need to pack or bring with you.
     E. If you could bring someone with you, who would bring?  Explain.
     F. Mode of transportation to arrive to your destination (example: airplane, bus, train, etc.)
     G. Things you want to do while you are there (example: visit museums, zoo, beach, famous landmarks, etc.)
     H. Souvenirs you would bring back to at least three important people in your life and explain the type of souvenir.

3. When you present you can be creative and play music, show a short video, dress-up, bring in food that represents that place, create a travel brochure, etc.

Presentations will begin the week of May 1st. 
All presentations must be completed by May 12th.  Anyone who has not presented by that date will receive a 0.

Image result for traveling

Friday, April 21, 2017

AP Class

Reminders:
Complete Commonlit assignment "Shut the door" Speech by Sunday (4/23) as well as weekly Vocab.com.

Those students coming Saturday to the AP Mock Exam at TERRA, you can park on the side of the school where the bus drop-off lane is.  I will wait for you outside so we can go in together.  Please arrive before 8am so we can start on time.

Friday, April 14, 2017

Congratulations Creative Writing Winners!

The following students received recognition for their creative writing pieces at the 2017 Youth Fair:

Dario Valdes -- 1st place
Luke Rivera -- 2nd place
Katherine Espertin -- 2nd place
Carlos Arencibia -- 3rd place
Jasmine Botello -- 3rd place
Sebastian Lopez -- 3rd place
Nicole Miranda -- 3rd place
Alexia Saavedra -- 3rd place
Marion Smith -- 3rd place
Garbriela Garcia -- 3rd place

I am proud of all of you!

Thursday, April 6, 2017

English II Spring Break Assignment

We are half way through the novel Everything Everything and have had many discussions about what is happening to Maddy.

Here are your assignments to complete over the break:

1. Commonlit "Rebel with a Cause"
2. Commonlit "Adolescence and the Teenage Crush"
3. Commonlit "Proposed Treatment to fix Genetic Diseases"
4. Create a chart where you document a day in your life. 
     *Each hour write down what you do for a whole day like Madeline does in the book.
       Refer to the example on page 23, 24 or 153,154

Commonlit questions must be answered by April 16th.
Bring your chart of a day in your life typed on April 17th.

Image result for life unexperienced is life not worth living

Monday, April 3, 2017

AP Class -- Spring Break Reflection Assignment

Emerson and Thoreau are considered philosophers of their time.
They were part of the Transcendentalist movement in the U.S.
They wrote about what they believed was essential to have in life.
For example:  friendship, love, nature, and being in charge of your own life.
You have read excerpts from their writing on Commonlit (Emerson's "Civil Disobedience")
and will complete over the break Thoreau's "Where I Lived and What I Lived For." 

I want you to reflect on your own life and what you can not live without.

Image result for thoreau sign in the woods

Think of your own life and create a list of things that you feel are essential.  This is your own TRUTH.  There are no right or wrong answer
You will write your own essay where you break down your list and explain each idea.
You must have at least 5 ideas on your list, which means you would have at least 5 paragraphs in your essay.

It must be:
*Typed, 12 point font, double spaced
*Headings for your 5 ideas

Your assignment will be due on April 17th.